My dear , I´m sorry to dissapoint you...but a haiku is not an explanation on what something means to you, it is not a simile either.. It´s not a guessing game..though it´s quite alike... It´s a very very intense metaphor... very hard to translate!!!! Replace it!!! FROM ANACARMEN
Laura tu haiku me parece fastinante.
ResponderEliminarEstá muy original y me parece tu elección genial.
¡¡Buen trabajo!!(:
My dear , I´m sorry to dissapoint you...but a haiku is not an explanation on what something means to you, it is not a simile either.. It´s not a guessing game..though it´s quite alike... It´s a very very intense metaphor... very hard to translate!!!! Replace it!!!
ResponderEliminarFROM ANACARMEN
Bien hecho!!! me a gustado mucho la relación que as echo del sol y tu madre, enhorabuena.
ResponderEliminarTu post me parece precioso!
ResponderEliminarBuen trabajo=)